aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i love the akechi route and im sooo ready for the sun route for akira, and for akechi too the rest of them too!! i hope it gets developed again!
Hi! I literally made an account just to make a message lmao. I just wanted to say that I really fell in love with this game! There was so much effort put into visuals and the stories kept me glued to my screen! I kept giggling during some of the parts of Akira and Akechis stories not only from cuteness but from how well put together it was! Great work! Cant wait to see more! (Unless y’all stopped or smth 😭)
naming myself Goro Akechi to romance Akira and then Akira Kurusu to romance Akechi, probably going to be confusing if the actual characters ever show up but.. LMAO LETS GOOO I'M EXCITED ALREADY
This game single-handedly made me want to buy Persona 5. Like I genuinely didn't think I would find a visual novel this good!! Thank you for creating such a wonderful game <3
First off; I messed up by submitting applications out of time, I'm so sorry, I just wanted to give it a shot and I didn't bother to ask if you were already a bit too overwhelmed or no longer accepting after like a year of posting that announcement. Just disregard me completely if I did an oopsie; at this moment clearly my Arcana is The Fool.
But other than that...This game. I played it a few months ago and was blown away - I keep thinking about it a lot from just how memorable it is. There is so much I want to say right now that I think I'll have to come back to it yet again to do it justice. The unfinished routes already have a really solid foundation, and Akira's is excellent too (though I've never been into Akira tbh), but man, Akechi's Moon route is just SO well-done and really surprised me. It has so many different little nods to your choices that make it super satisfying to play through (and replay, because I really wasn't expecting there to be nods to that as well!), the endings are well-chosen and satisfying, and it's overall just such good quality that it genuinely reminded me of some official routes from good otome games I've played. I also really liked the Moon protagonist. She's relatable enough but she also has her own little story arcs and character development; it's excellent. It's a beautiful project. I think what you already have here is so great that I legitimately won't mind waiting as long as it takes, or if life just gets in the way in general that's fine. I'm super happy with what I got to play. Kudos to everyone involved.
I just hope you're still working on this, it would be a shame if something this beautiful that has so much to offer gets abandoned. Some small updates will be nice. 🧡
i just finished akira and goro's good end and im just wondering.....
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IS THE WORLD CARD HINTING AT A POSIBLIE POLY RELATIONSHIP WITH AKIRA AND GORO??!! CUZ IT IF IT IS IM GONNA CRY, but but i cant wait for more updates for this game too and the routes have such replay value. i love the added dialogues and the way the routes are written have a tight grip on my neck. like seriously i adored this so much and i hope there will be an update added soon!!!
I AM CRYING AND YELLING I JUST FINISHED AKECHI'S MOON ROUTE!!!
tbh it ended better than OG persona 5
IT WAS SO WHOLESOME AND VERY WELL WRITTEN
i was thoroughly invested THE ENTIRE TIME
it has given me the goro boost i desperately needed
GORO my beloved, my darling!!
I'm sorry I'm beyond ecstatic. This is really so damn good. I cracked up (literally out loud) at the phone convos, esp near the end. The character development for both Goro and MC was so on par. I cried, I laughed, I was shocked. I needed so much of this in the original game. I cannot wait to play more and to see what else yall come up with in the future!!
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I adore how the PTs outwardly support, in their own adorable ways, the relationship between MC and goro. they're so sweet and genuine, i felt like a part of their team. I also love the romantic parts, and I hope to see more added possibly (especially spicy lol), but no matter what, it was great
you all did such a good job on all the routes so far! there's been a lot of improvement since the last time I played it :)) ill make sure ill look out for the rest of the routes! <3
yesterday i played akechi's moon route and i really really loved it im so excited to play other routes AND I HOPE ANN ROUTE COMES I REALLY NEED IT PLSS
I played this game with my friend and it was so much fun. We played Akechi's route for a whole 4 hours because we could just not stop playing it. I really hope all of you are continuing this project because I would love to see the end of it. All of you are such talented and cool people, seriously.
This Project has SO much love put into it, Both of the completed routes are a delight, And even the unfinished ones have me delighted to see what comes in the future. Excellent work and Thank you too!
i am in love with everything about this. i've played the available routes twice and i'm still utterly speechless about how well put out it is; wonderful composition and story. i've never played persona myself, but after going through this it's definitely something that has been on my mind to eventually get! thank you to the amazing people who are working on this <33 it's a favourite vn of mine now,, to the point i have made art based on some of the scenes ehe
I found this project a few days ago and decided to give it a try since I love Persona 5. I finished one of the routes yesterday and I have to say that I enjoyed it a lot, so I wanted to thank you for the dedication put into this game. I'm not very good at giving reviews but I still wanted to leave a comment and say that this visual novel exceeded my expectations even though it's not finished yet. Very good job, I really enjoyed it! <3
I just binged the finished routes over the last few weeks and gosh i cannot express how much I love this. Especially Akechi's route everything about it just chefs kiss, man. Hope to see more in the future <3
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That awakening scene and everything after it just oh boy howdy like a hit to the gut in a good way!!
I love it! Anyway, I have a question. In Akechi's bad ending 2, who was with the dying MC? And what exactly did they say?
On their own routes, Ren or Akechi, they feel familiar to us, Ren even asked out. Especially on Akechi's route, it surprised me when he said: "I can definitely see you adopting a dog" (and I don't see the option "I don't think I would adopt either.":0000). Is it a surprise for the players? I love that! It makes me feel like they recognize and remember me as the player, in a way.
It was Goro! Fun fact, when the screen goes completely black, if you open the History menu you should be able to see the dialogue! But essentially it was the MC calling out Goro's name c:
Yes, the game does remember some of your choices on your second playthrough haha I'm glad people are replaying it and finding out this feature ♡
im not familiar with the persona franchise but this is so well made! im surprised at the level dedication you put into this. i really resonated with the timid mc and the mysterious voice describing it only hammered how i present myself lmao. i dont know his name but i enjoyed this blond dude's route the last time i played this. i remember it starting off with the mc sleeping in a cafe and then suddenly were exercising. i was sad to see him not available yet but the other characters were fun to go through. i really do feel like im actually originally part of the story even thought i know nothing about it lmao
i feel bad at the start of the moon mc on akechi's route. i know it gets better through the end but mans was hella mean at the start and idk if i wanna go through his route with a moon mc.
I did put a lot of hours into this, for sure. I'm so happy to see the love I poured into the project being recognized! ♡
Ah Ryuji! Yes, unfortunately the writer was changed for that route and we want to respect the previous writer's work so we had it scrapped. You should hopefully see him back on our next release!
Oh yes, I definitely wouldn't recommend Akechi's moon route if you're looking for something fluffy like Akira/Ren's moon route haha Akechi isn't a nice character and he's very complex - I'm not sure if you'll like him at all if you haven't played Persona 5 (especially the Royal version). Totally understandable, just skip the route if you don't think you'll enjoy it! :)
Ah, this game is so good, thank you so much for making it! The stylization, writing, game OST, it all makes me feel like I'm playing the actual game <3 if there was one thing I would change, and something I think this game desperately needs, is the ability to choose your protagonist's gender ^^; we have all these other customization options I think it would be good to have that as well! And it's incredibly immersion breaking whenever I'm referred to as "they", since that's not how I'm referred to in real life at all, and I like to self insert into these games when I can!! So if you were to change anything about the game, please have it be that, I beg you, haha! At the end of the day though this is just my opinion and I'm not sure how many people share it, but something to keep in mind maybe! Other than that, keep up the great work, this project is great!
Yes, the player customization is very minimal, I know. I wanted to focus on their personality being the main thing that shapes the MC. And also mostly because there's a lot of work being involved in creating other customizations, even for just the pronouns. I am the main scripter (+writer +coder +tester) across most routes, so all the scripting and testing for that will fall onto me, and I just didn't have the bandwith for that. We'll see into incorporating that when we have the time and resources though :
LOVE it! My favourite thing about this is that it's not some visual novel using characters and game setting but instead introduces your character into the main story of persona so it feels like you're part of their lives and the original game's story.
I want to thank you for this beautiful project you are doing, I always wanted to have a date with Ren Amamiya and I loved being able to talk with him, I know they are in beta but it makes you feel the same essence of Persona 5.
I know it is still on the making and there ius more to come. Even with better things but I will still comment on what I have enjoyed so far.
The writing is simply amazing and it makes me really happy that the MC/Y/N is very relatable in both Sun and Moon. The only thing that stings slightly is how in one of the CGs we are able to see "our" hand. A very light skin color- which sort of affects the self insert feeling(?). But that is just me being silly and picky.
I already finished Akira's/Ren's route and Oh my God, you got his character to the T. He is just how I always image. Dependable, trustworthy, flirty, a tease and most importantly... and adorable dork. Both happy endings made me feel so much, especially the first good ending(or was it the second??).
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I swear, I can not be the only one that felt that subtle fourth wall break when that alternative universe happened. Because, in reality, we do not exist. In the Persona world, I mean. And it stings. And it is thanks to this fan game that we are able to be part of the experience. For as many times as we want. And Akira/Ren, surely needs that comfort in his life. I wonder if Atlus would ever give us that blessing chance-
Either way, the visual novel is so great so far and as I said at the beginning, it will turn even better and I am can wait for what you guys have in storage for everyone that is an avid fan of the franchise. We wish you nothing but the best of luck and hopefully we will be able to land you a hand if you need it.
PS: I did not go for Akira's/Ren's bad ending because I can not bring myself to do it. My poor heart can stand so much. So... I would not mind if anyone decides to spoil me on that. I would appreciate it a lot. Please and thank you.
That was one of the thing one of our writers pointed out actually. Dw, you're not being picky at all! We do want to have a player customization in the future so we can tackle this issue, but trust me when I say it requires a ton of work being done and as of now I don't think we have any resources for that 😥
Sobs I'm always so happy whenever people tell me that I got characterization right! Akira/Ren was so fun to write but sometimes I worry whether I made him too cheeky or too flirty... And it doesn't help that he's a silent protag in the game lol
Ahah yessss I'm so happy that you recognize that! (I also just wanted to see Akira/Ren suffer a bit ngl) Personally I like that ending more than the other, and fun little fact, I knew I wanted to have it the moment I decided to work on his moon route lol
Akira/Ren's bad ending isn't too bad, it's just... sad. I can describe it to you but tbh there are some things I just can't replicate in words, so I'll skip those I guess. Here goes:
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Basically for the bad end, it's implied that Akira/Ren failed to negotiate with Sae and was actually shot in the head by Akechi (like in one of the original game's bad end). So right after the MC tried to visit LeBlanc, the scene cuts out and it's a fast forward to months later. MC is siting in a hospital waiting room, you get some short backstory of how the PT has basically disbanded (very vague implication that some are even dead). Afterwards, they fall asleep and when they wake up, they're in the doctor's room, and you'll see Maruki talking to you. The MC basically breaks down, tells him they can't do this anymore and want to stop the therapy sessions.... And if you guessed it, you're right. He uses his power to alter the reality so the MC won't be sad anymore. So MC wakes up in bed, at night, and sees Akira/Ren sleeping across them, thinks they're having nightmares again, but then as he wakes up they realize that it wasn't a dream. And now MC's convinced that all of it was just a long, bad nightmare, falls asleep against Akira/Ren, and the scene cuts to black....
Lastly, it shows Akira/Ren waking up, sitting on bed and looking around the room, and he even sees Mona across the room, who meowed at him. He then notices the MC being restless in their sleep and only relaxes when he holds them. It's never said in the game itself, but yes, in my head I think he's able to piece things together and understand the situation there. And then:
Akira/Ren: "....."
Akira/Ren: "I'm sorry."
"He's met with silence."
Akira/Ren: "I'm.... so sorry....."
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Things has been really slow ever since we released the latest beta, but thank you for your kind words! It means a lot to me and to the whole team ♡
This game is beautifully written; not to mention, I really feel like I’m playing persona 5 sometimes due to the way the assets were implemented. 10/10 immersion points! I played the demo a while back and fell in love with the idea. While I’m sad Ryuji was removed (rip…I know he’s still there don’t worry!) I loved everything new that was included. The characters ooze with personality. There was never a moment that threw me out of the narrative. I never had a “Futaba wouldn’t say that,” Kind of moment. Not only were the boys’ routes fun to play but the phantom thieves were always a pleasure to see. I also believe implementing the phantom points in Akechi’s moon route was clever as gives incentive for the player to care about the choice they make when interacting with the cast. I should probably actually talk about the love interests now, instead of analyzing the game like one would a school project.
I’ll start with the Akechi Moon route.
This route was fun because I questioned the whole time if the writer was going to kill off Akechi or not. While killing Akechi could lead to a beautiful bittersweet ending I’m actually quite happy the good ending let him live. The story allowed me to see a what if scenario where Akechi actually gets to go up against Shido. It might not be a scene that would fit well in the original game, but in this story he grows. It felt like that moment was an accumulation of all the work the player put in. Also the way Akechi acts towards the end of his route feels natural because of the well crafted shift in character. If I had one gripe I’d say that the ending of both the finished routes is kind of abrupt, almost like the last couple lines weren’t written for a conclusion. A minor nitpick really. Honestly though the whole route is so well done. I’m honestly just grateful for the team behind the project. You all are doing outstanding work.
This post is long so I’ll just talk about Akira’s moon route and call it good.
His route was so cute, the author breathed so much life into the protagonist. I understood why he had a harem of girls; he was made extremely charming. The whole Maruki segment of the route was also cool to see. That moment really gave Akira a reason to resist the world. Whereas in the original game he kinda just does/doesn’t. There isn’t to much of a real drive, juxtaposed to here. The Y/N character was also very adorable.I can see why she got the protagonist’s attention. Also, both Akechi and Akira were characters I liked moderately, but the routes made me appreciate them both way more.
Anyways this game is so fun thus far. I can’t wait to play the other routes! Keep up the good work! You guys are amazing!
That was an essay, oh my god. If you read the whole thing you’re a real one. Also sorry if this came off as a critique I’ve just been doing a lot of those recently so it kind of slipped in.
I'm literally smiling ear-to-ear this was so beautiful to read ;w;
You'll see Ryuji again! Don't worry!! ;w;
sldfkjsldf one of the reasons I made this game was because I wanted him to be alive at the end, I don't think you'll ever see any bad endings where he ends up dead even if I decide to add more branches into it haha
YES tbh I struggled a lot with deciding how his route will develop because I wanted to keep him alive and have the chance to redeem himself, but still keep him in character somehow. I think that's partly why his route ended up longer than Akira/Ren's moon route, because you're absolutely correct - I needed the player to see that he's grown, that you had an impact on him, not instantly, but over time.
Let me tell you a secret... The endings were abrupt because I was actually planning to have epilogues lol I couldn't make it to the deadline tho, so I ended up releasing without them, but hopefully I'll be able to add them in sometime!
I hc Akira/Ren having maxed out Charm since his first day lol Yeah I think in the original game the fact that he's a silent & blank slate of a protag, just made for the player to self-insert into his position, can make some developments feel a bit 'huh?'... So I was glad to be able to explore and imagine how his personality is in this fangame heheh
PS. Don't ever apologize for long posts! I absolutely love them ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ Thank you for your kind words ♡
I finally saw that this project was updated, and I'm really impressed with what's been published so far!
I haven't finished Akechi or Akira's moon routes yet but I've really enjoyed what I've seen so far. Akechi's character development in particular is extraordinary! I'm most excited for Yusuke's sun route in particular, since I'm always a sucker for personality clashes. His moon route is also really well done, and definitely a nice reprieve from the drama in the other moon routes lol.
I'm still surprised that two routes are already done, so I just wanted to reiterate how impressed I am by this entire project. This is one of the best VNs I've played in a while c:
Gosh yes, Yusuke's moon route is very relaxing, I think Rainy did a really good job with creating a cozy vibe there, tho I'm not sure if it'll change as the route develops 👀
So happy to hear such lovely words! Thank you for dropping by ♡
Akechi's moon route is my favourite so far. The character development he went through in the good ending is really touching, and I'm so relieved he lives in that ending lol. The MC getting their own persona was such a satisfying moment, and Akechi's 3rd persona fit well into that as well. Normally I'd be more conflicted with a character like Akechi living since he doesn't develop in a way that would make him want to live in the main game. However, I think it does make a lot more sense within the route why he lives, and I'd actually find it less understandable if he did die. The banter with the other phantom thieves in his route is just so much fun as well, especially Futaba, Akira, and Yusuke.
I also realized I never complimented the UI before! It's obviously very similar to Persona 5's, but still very polished and clear to read.
I still haven't finished Akira's route though, so oof :c . I've really enjoyed what I've seen so far though! I'm especially excited and curious for the world route I've heard about lol.
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i love the akechi route and im sooo ready for the sun route for akira, and for akechi too the rest of them too!! i hope it gets developed again!
I never got to play Persona 5 bcuz it costs money, so finding this game makes me really happy!!! I can't wait to see the finished result!
Hi! I literally made an account just to make a message lmao. I just wanted to say that I really fell in love with this game! There was so much effort put into visuals and the stories kept me glued to my screen! I kept giggling during some of the parts of Akira and Akechis stories not only from cuteness but from how well put together it was! Great work! Cant wait to see more! (Unless y’all stopped or smth 😭)
naming myself Goro Akechi to romance Akira and then Akira Kurusu to romance Akechi, probably going to be confusing if the actual characters ever show up but.. LMAO LETS GOOO I'M EXCITED ALREADY
I LOVE IT!! the stories are so well done
please finish this
Hey, are you guys still working on it?
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
ive been looking for a persona dating sim since FOREVER!!
time to hunt for a p3 one now ahaha!!
This game single-handedly made me want to buy Persona 5. Like I genuinely didn't think I would find a visual novel this good!! Thank you for creating such a wonderful game <3
I don't usually comment but just wanted to say I love this game so much!! thank you to everyone that's worked on it.
First off; I messed up by submitting applications out of time, I'm so sorry, I just wanted to give it a shot and I didn't bother to ask if you were already a bit too overwhelmed or no longer accepting after like a year of posting that announcement. Just disregard me completely if I did an oopsie; at this moment clearly my Arcana is The Fool.
But other than that...This game. I played it a few months ago and was blown away - I keep thinking about it a lot from just how memorable it is. There is so much I want to say right now that I think I'll have to come back to it yet again to do it justice. The unfinished routes already have a really solid foundation, and Akira's is excellent too (though I've never been into Akira tbh), but man, Akechi's Moon route is just SO well-done and really surprised me. It has so many different little nods to your choices that make it super satisfying to play through (and replay, because I really wasn't expecting there to be nods to that as well!), the endings are well-chosen and satisfying, and it's overall just such good quality that it genuinely reminded me of some official routes from good otome games I've played. I also really liked the Moon protagonist. She's relatable enough but she also has her own little story arcs and character development; it's excellent. It's a beautiful project. I think what you already have here is so great that I legitimately won't mind waiting as long as it takes, or if life just gets in the way in general that's fine. I'm super happy with what I got to play. Kudos to everyone involved.
I just hope you're still working on this, it would be a shame if something this beautiful that has so much to offer gets abandoned. Some small updates will be nice. 🧡
are you guys still working on this?
Wow. Akechi's Moon route awakened something in me... and it's probably not a Persona.
I'm sorry, this is one of the funniest comments I've ever seen - *Wheeze*
i just finished akira and goro's good end and im just wondering.....
SPOILER ALERT
IS THE WORLD CARD HINTING AT A POSIBLIE POLY RELATIONSHIP WITH AKIRA AND GORO??!! CUZ IT IF IT IS IM GONNA CRY, but but i cant wait for more updates for this game too and the routes have such replay value. i love the added dialogues and the way the routes are written have a tight grip on my neck. like seriously i adored this so much and i hope there will be an update added soon!!!
I AM CRYING AND YELLING I JUST FINISHED AKECHI'S MOON ROUTE!!!
tbh it ended better than OG persona 5
IT WAS SO WHOLESOME AND VERY WELL WRITTEN
i was thoroughly invested THE ENTIRE TIME
it has given me the goro boost i desperately needed
GORO my beloved, my darling!!
I'm sorry I'm beyond ecstatic. This is really so damn good. I cracked up (literally out loud) at the phone convos, esp near the end. The character development for both Goro and MC was so on par. I cried, I laughed, I was shocked. I needed so much of this in the original game. I cannot wait to play more and to see what else yall come up with in the future!!
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I adore how the PTs outwardly support, in their own adorable ways, the relationship between MC and goro. they're so sweet and genuine, i felt like a part of their team. I also love the romantic parts, and I hope to see more added possibly (especially spicy lol), but no matter what, it was great
This is great I love this and keep replaying it I hope I get to see Ann's route someday which I will wait patiently for.
Can someone help me how to get Akechi's second ending? I'd appreciate a lot :D
i forgot which it is, but keep his affection below 90 or 95, and told him the results of your spying
akira's bad ending really fucked me up
Ikr x'D
I have to stopped playing this game for a few days cause of the trauma I had when playing his route
you all did such a good job on all the routes so far! there's been a lot of improvement since the last time I played it :)) ill make sure ill look out for the rest of the routes! <3
really great job so far! i'm a huge fan of how you've written akechi. really looking forward to the rest of the routes. (:
yesterday i played akechi's moon route and i really really loved it im so excited to play other routes AND I HOPE ANN ROUTE COMES I REALLY NEED IT PLSS
I played this game with my friend and it was so much fun. We played Akechi's route for a whole 4 hours because we could just not stop playing it. I really hope all of you are continuing this project because I would love to see the end of it. All of you are such talented and cool people, seriously.
This Project has SO much love put into it, Both of the completed routes are a delight, And even the unfinished ones have me delighted to see what comes in the future. Excellent work and Thank you too!
Very nice! Loved Ren's second ending
i am in love with everything about this. i've played the available routes twice and i'm still utterly speechless about how well put out it is; wonderful composition and story. i've never played persona myself, but after going through this it's definitely something that has been on my mind to eventually get! thank you to the amazing people who are working on this <33 it's a favourite vn of mine now,, to the point i have made art based on some of the scenes ehe
No Ryuji route? :(
I found this project a few days ago and decided to give it a try since I love Persona 5. I finished one of the routes yesterday and I have to say that I enjoyed it a lot, so I wanted to thank you for the dedication put into this game. I'm not very good at giving reviews but I still wanted to leave a comment and say that this visual novel exceeded my expectations even though it's not finished yet. Very good job, I really enjoyed it! <3
I just binged the finished routes over the last few weeks and gosh i cannot express how much I love this. Especially Akechi's route everything about it just chefs kiss, man.
Hope to see more in the future <3
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That awakening scene and everything after it just oh boy howdy like a hit to the gut in a good way!!
I love it! Anyway, I have a question. In Akechi's bad ending 2, who was with the dying MC? And what exactly did they say?
On their own routes, Ren or Akechi, they feel familiar to us, Ren even asked out. Especially on Akechi's route, it surprised me when he said: "I can definitely see you adopting a dog" (and I don't see the option "I don't think I would adopt either.":0000). Is it a surprise for the players? I love that! It makes me feel like they recognize and remember me as the player, in a way.
Thank you so much for building this game! >///<
Thank you for the lovely comment! 🌹
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It was Goro! Fun fact, when the screen goes completely black, if you open the History menu you should be able to see the dialogue! But essentially it was the MC calling out Goro's name c:
Yes, the game does remember some of your choices on your second playthrough haha I'm glad people are replaying it and finding out this feature ♡
im not familiar with the persona franchise but this is so well made! im surprised at the level dedication you put into this. i really resonated with the timid mc and the mysterious voice describing it only hammered how i present myself lmao. i dont know his name but i enjoyed this blond dude's route the last time i played this. i remember it starting off with the mc sleeping in a cafe and then suddenly were exercising. i was sad to see him not available yet but the other characters were fun to go through. i really do feel like im actually originally part of the story even thought i know nothing about it lmao
i feel bad at the start of the moon mc on akechi's route. i know it gets better through the end but mans was hella mean at the start and idk if i wanna go through his route with a moon mc.
I did put a lot of hours into this, for sure. I'm so happy to see the love I poured into the project being recognized! ♡
Ah Ryuji! Yes, unfortunately the writer was changed for that route and we want to respect the previous writer's work so we had it scrapped. You should hopefully see him back on our next release!
Oh yes, I definitely wouldn't recommend Akechi's moon route if you're looking for something fluffy like Akira/Ren's moon route haha Akechi isn't a nice character and he's very complex - I'm not sure if you'll like him at all if you haven't played Persona 5 (especially the Royal version). Totally understandable, just skip the route if you don't think you'll enjoy it! :)
I fall in love with joker. Even in Akechi's route, I still fall in love with him.
Joker is such a heart-stealer isn't he haha
Ah, this game is so good, thank you so much for making it! The stylization, writing, game OST, it all makes me feel like I'm playing the actual game <3 if there was one thing I would change, and something I think this game desperately needs, is the ability to choose your protagonist's gender ^^; we have all these other customization options I think it would be good to have that as well! And it's incredibly immersion breaking whenever I'm referred to as "they", since that's not how I'm referred to in real life at all, and I like to self insert into these games when I can!! So if you were to change anything about the game, please have it be that, I beg you, haha! At the end of the day though this is just my opinion and I'm not sure how many people share it, but something to keep in mind maybe! Other than that, keep up the great work, this project is great!
You're too kind! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Yes, the player customization is very minimal, I know. I wanted to focus on their personality being the main thing that shapes the MC. And also mostly because there's a lot of work being involved in creating other customizations, even for just the pronouns. I am the main scripter (+writer +coder +tester) across most routes, so all the scripting and testing for that will fall onto me, and I just didn't have the bandwith for that. We'll see into incorporating that when we have the time and resources though :
LOVE it! My favourite thing about this is that it's not some visual novel using characters and game setting but instead introduces your character into the main story of persona so it feels like you're part of their lives and the original game's story.
I'm extremely excited for more! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
Aha yes that's the best part about otome fangames for sure ♡
I want to thank you for this beautiful project you are doing, I always wanted to have a date with Ren Amamiya and I loved being able to talk with him, I know they are in beta but it makes you feel the same essence of Persona 5.
Thank you!! Tbh my main reason why I made this was also because I wanted to date Akira/Ren and Goro sooooo yeah lol
I know it is still on the making and there ius more to come. Even with better things but I will still comment on what I have enjoyed so far.
The writing is simply amazing and it makes me really happy that the MC/Y/N is very relatable in both Sun and Moon. The only thing that stings slightly is how in one of the CGs we are able to see "our" hand. A very light skin color- which sort of affects the self insert feeling(?). But that is just me being silly and picky.
I already finished Akira's/Ren's route and Oh my God, you got his character to the T. He is just how I always image. Dependable, trustworthy, flirty, a tease and most importantly... and adorable dork. Both happy endings made me feel so much, especially the first good ending(or was it the second??).
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I swear, I can not be the only one that felt that subtle fourth wall break when that alternative universe happened. Because, in reality, we do not exist. In the Persona world, I mean. And it stings. And it is thanks to this fan game that we are able to be part of the experience. For as many times as we want. And Akira/Ren, surely needs that comfort in his life. I wonder if Atlus would ever give us that blessing chance-
Either way, the visual novel is so great so far and as I said at the beginning, it will turn even better and I am can wait for what you guys have in storage for everyone that is an avid fan of the franchise. We wish you nothing but the best of luck and hopefully we will be able to land you a hand if you need it.
PS: I did not go for Akira's/Ren's bad ending because I can not bring myself to do it. My poor heart can stand so much. So... I would not mind if anyone decides to spoil me on that. I would appreciate it a lot. Please and thank you.
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That was one of the thing one of our writers pointed out actually. Dw, you're not being picky at all! We do want to have a player customization in the future so we can tackle this issue, but trust me when I say it requires a ton of work being done and as of now I don't think we have any resources for that 😥
Sobs I'm always so happy whenever people tell me that I got characterization right! Akira/Ren was so fun to write but sometimes I worry whether I made him too cheeky or too flirty... And it doesn't help that he's a silent protag in the game lol
Ahah yessss I'm so happy that you recognize that! (I also just wanted to see Akira/Ren suffer a bit ngl) Personally I like that ending more than the other, and fun little fact, I knew I wanted to have it the moment I decided to work on his moon route lol
Akira/Ren's bad ending isn't too bad, it's just... sad. I can describe it to you but tbh there are some things I just can't replicate in words, so I'll skip those I guess. Here goes:
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Basically for the bad end, it's implied that Akira/Ren failed to negotiate with Sae and was actually shot in the head by Akechi (like in one of the original game's bad end). So right after the MC tried to visit LeBlanc, the scene cuts out and it's a fast forward to months later. MC is siting in a hospital waiting room, you get some short backstory of how the PT has basically disbanded (very vague implication that some are even dead). Afterwards, they fall asleep and when they wake up, they're in the doctor's room, and you'll see Maruki talking to you. The MC basically breaks down, tells him they can't do this anymore and want to stop the therapy sessions.... And if you guessed it, you're right. He uses his power to alter the reality so the MC won't be sad anymore. So MC wakes up in bed, at night, and sees Akira/Ren sleeping across them, thinks they're having nightmares again, but then as he wakes up they realize that it wasn't a dream. And now MC's convinced that all of it was just a long, bad nightmare, falls asleep against Akira/Ren, and the scene cuts to black....
Lastly, it shows Akira/Ren waking up, sitting on bed and looking around the room, and he even sees Mona across the room, who meowed at him. He then notices the MC being restless in their sleep and only relaxes when he holds them. It's never said in the game itself, but yes, in my head I think he's able to piece things together and understand the situation there. And then:
Akira/Ren: "....."
Akira/Ren: "I'm sorry."
"He's met with silence."
Akira/Ren: "I'm.... so sorry....."
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Things has been really slow ever since we released the latest beta, but thank you for your kind words! It means a lot to me and to the whole team ♡
💥Spoilers💥
This game is beautifully written; not to mention, I really feel like I’m playing persona 5 sometimes due to the way the assets were implemented. 10/10 immersion points! I played the demo a while back and fell in love with the idea. While I’m sad Ryuji was removed (rip…I know he’s still there don’t worry!) I loved everything new that was included. The characters ooze with personality. There was never a moment that threw me out of the narrative. I never had a “Futaba wouldn’t say that,” Kind of moment. Not only were the boys’ routes fun to play but the phantom thieves were always a pleasure to see. I also believe implementing the phantom points in Akechi’s moon route was clever as gives incentive for the player to care about the choice they make when interacting with the cast. I should probably actually talk about the love interests now, instead of analyzing the game like one would a school project.
I’ll start with the Akechi Moon route.
This route was fun because I questioned the whole time if the writer was going to kill off Akechi or not. While killing Akechi could lead to a beautiful bittersweet ending I’m actually quite happy the good ending let him live. The story allowed me to see a what if scenario where Akechi actually gets to go up against Shido. It might not be a scene that would fit well in the original game, but in this story he grows. It felt like that moment was an accumulation of all the work the player put in. Also the way Akechi acts towards the end of his route feels natural because of the well crafted shift in character. If I had one gripe I’d say that the ending of both the finished routes is kind of abrupt, almost like the last couple lines weren’t written for a conclusion. A minor nitpick really. Honestly though the whole route is so well done. I’m honestly just grateful for the team behind the project. You all are doing outstanding work.
This post is long so I’ll just talk about Akira’s moon route and call it good.
His route was so cute, the author breathed so much life into the protagonist. I understood why he had a harem of girls; he was made extremely charming. The whole Maruki segment of the route was also cool to see. That moment really gave Akira a reason to resist the world. Whereas in the original game he kinda just does/doesn’t. There isn’t to much of a real drive, juxtaposed to here. The Y/N character was also very adorable.I can see why she got the protagonist’s attention. Also, both Akechi and Akira were characters I liked moderately, but the routes made me appreciate them both way more.
Anyways this game is so fun thus far. I can’t wait to play the other routes! Keep up the good work! You guys are amazing!
Ah I forgot to mention. The art is beautiful!!!!
That was an essay, oh my god. If you read the whole thing you’re a real one. Also sorry if this came off as a critique I’ve just been doing a lot of those recently so it kind of slipped in.
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I'm literally smiling ear-to-ear this was so beautiful to read ;w;
You'll see Ryuji again! Don't worry!! ;w;
sldfkjsldf one of the reasons I made this game was because I wanted him to be alive at the end, I don't think you'll ever see any bad endings where he ends up dead even if I decide to add more branches into it haha
YES tbh I struggled a lot with deciding how his route will develop because I wanted to keep him alive and have the chance to redeem himself, but still keep him in character somehow. I think that's partly why his route ended up longer than Akira/Ren's moon route, because you're absolutely correct - I needed the player to see that he's grown, that you had an impact on him, not instantly, but over time.
Let me tell you a secret... The endings were abrupt because I was actually planning to have epilogues lol I couldn't make it to the deadline tho, so I ended up releasing without them, but hopefully I'll be able to add them in sometime!
I hc Akira/Ren having maxed out Charm since his first day lol Yeah I think in the original game the fact that he's a silent & blank slate of a protag, just made for the player to self-insert into his position, can make some developments feel a bit 'huh?'... So I was glad to be able to explore and imagine how his personality is in this fangame heheh
PS. Don't ever apologize for long posts! I absolutely love them ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ Thank you for your kind words ♡
I finally saw that this project was updated, and I'm really impressed with what's been published so far!
I haven't finished Akechi or Akira's moon routes yet but I've really enjoyed what I've seen so far. Akechi's character development in particular is extraordinary! I'm most excited for Yusuke's sun route in particular, since I'm always a sucker for personality clashes. His moon route is also really well done, and definitely a nice reprieve from the drama in the other moon routes lol.
I'm still surprised that two routes are already done, so I just wanted to reiterate how impressed I am by this entire project. This is one of the best VNs I've played in a while c:
I hope you managed to finish the routes by now!
Gosh yes, Yusuke's moon route is very relaxing, I think Rainy did a really good job with creating a cozy vibe there, tho I'm not sure if it'll change as the route develops 👀
So happy to hear such lovely words! Thank you for dropping by ♡
No problem!
Spoilers for Akechi!
Akechi's moon route is my favourite so far. The character development he went through in the good ending is really touching, and I'm so relieved he lives in that ending lol. The MC getting their own persona was such a satisfying moment, and Akechi's 3rd persona fit well into that as well. Normally I'd be more conflicted with a character like Akechi living since he doesn't develop in a way that would make him want to live in the main game. However, I think it does make a lot more sense within the route why he lives, and I'd actually find it less understandable if he did die. The banter with the other phantom thieves in his route is just so much fun as well, especially Futaba, Akira, and Yusuke.
I also realized I never complimented the UI before! It's obviously very similar to Persona 5's, but still very polished and clear to read.
I still haven't finished Akira's route though, so oof :c . I've really enjoyed what I've seen so far though! I'm especially excited and curious for the world route I've heard about lol.